Can you please read/critique my poem? :)?

woah! this is really good. I have read lots of poems from people like Pablo Neruda and it's my first time to read a poem with a structure and setting such as this. Two people having a casual conversation of their inner feelings spoken to each other, however, ended it with a reminder that their relationship won't go far. There's not much detail so you're leaving the readers the option to use their imagination. It could be forbidden love or mindless lust. When I was reading it, I can't help to think about a situation such as a one night stand or a cheating man/woman. It's unique and the writing style is spontaneous without being superfluous.Great job!