Sunday, July 17, 2011

Can a native speaker of English check structure and grammar of the sentences, thanks?

I recalled the little boy whom I loved when I was in kindergarten; he looked likeable. For sometime I brought candy and toys to him every day, and he readily accepted all gifts. We had lied in the same bed and had a pleasant chat. Nevertheless he fell into a sleep quickly for a little while, looking so seraphic while he slept. Once he came along with me to the infirmary to have an injection; he praised me for my bravery. These are all memories that I can remember about him. Perhaps this is my first love.

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